Pronoun/Antecedent Agreement
Pronoun
A pronoun is a substitute for a noun. It refers to a person, place, thing, feeling, or quality but does not refer to it by its name. The pronoun in the following sample sentence is bolded.
The critique of Plato's Republic was written from a contemporary point of view. It was an in-depth analysis of Plato's opinions about possible governmental forms.
Antecedent
An antecedent is the word, phrase, or clause to which a pronoun refers, understood by the context. The antecedent in the following sample sentence is bolded.
The critique of Plato's Republic was written from a contemporary point of view. It was an in-depth analysis of Plato's opinions about possible governmental forms.
While the pronouns I and you can be replaced by nouns, the context of a sentence does not always require the nouns to make clear to which persons I and you refer. However, the third person pronouns (he, she, it, they) almost always derive their meaning from their antecedents or the words for which they stand. Remember that pronouns in the third person communicate nothing unless the reader knows what they mean:
It is the best source available. What source is that?
Agreement
A pronoun must agree with its antecedent in three ways:
· Person refers to the quality of being.
· Number is the quality that distinguishes between singular (one entity) and plural (numerous entities).
· Gender is the quality that distinguishes the entities as masculine or feminine.
The following are some incorrect sentences. An explanation of the conflicts that some sentences may present in person, number, and gender and some possible solutions to the errors are given.
Incorrect Sentence
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If a person wants to succeed in corporate life, you have to know the rules of the game. |
Explanation
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Antecedent |
a person (third person) |
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Pronoun |
you (second person) |
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Conclusion |
no person agreement |
Solution
Although the antecedent and the pronoun agree in number, they do not agree in person. This problem can be remedied in two ways.
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Solution |
Example |
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Change the second person singular, you, to a third person singular pronoun. |
If a person wants to succeed in corporate life, he or she has to know the rules of the game. |
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Change the third person singular antecedent, a person, to a second person singular antecedent. |
If you want to succeed in corporate life, you have to know the rules of the game. |
Incorrect Sentence
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If anybody wants to succeed in corporate life, they have to know the rules of the game. |
Explanation
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Antecedent |
anybody (third person singular) |
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Pronoun |
they (third person plural) |
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Conclusion |
no number agreement |
Solution
Although the antecedent and pronoun agree in person, they do not agree in number. This problem can be remedied in two ways.
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Solution |
Example |
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Make the antecedent plural. |
If people want to succeed in corporate life, they have to know the rules of the game. |
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Make the pronoun singular. |
If anybody wants to succeed in corporate life, he or she has to know the rules of the game. |
Incorrect Sentence
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If a person wants to succeed in corporate life, he has to know the rules of the game. |
Explanation
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Antecedent |
a person (third person neutral singular) |
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Pronoun |
he (third person masculine singular) |
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Conclusion |
no gender agreement |
Solution
Even though there is person and number agreement between the antecedent, a person, and the pronoun, he, there is no gender agreement; in other words, the language appears to favor one sex over the other. This problem can be remedied in two ways.
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Solution |
Example |
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Replace the pronoun he with he or she. |
If a person wants to succeed in corporate life, he or she has to know the rules of the game. |
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Make the entire sentence plural. |
If people want to succeed in corporate life, they have to know the rules of the game. |
Pronoun/Antecedent Agreement
The indefinite pronouns anyone, anybody, everyone, everybody, someone, somebody, no one, and nobody are always singular. This is sometimes perplexing to writers who feel that everyone and everybody (especially) are referring to more than one person. The same is true of either and neither, which are always singular even though they seem to be referring to two things.
Too many his's and her's eventually become annoying, however, and the reader becomes more aware of the writer trying to be conscious of good form than he or she is of the matter at hand.
Trying to conform to the above rule (#2) can lead to a great deal of nonsense. It is widely regarded as being correct (or correct enough), at the beginning of the twenty-first century, to say
but many people would object its being written that way because somebody is singular and their is plural. There is a great deal to be said, however, for using the word their as the gender-non-specific, singular pronoun. In fact, it's been said already, and you can read all about it at the The University of Texas, where a web-site has been dedicated to the use of their in this way in the writings of Jane Austen, William Shakespeare, and other literary greats. At least it's nice to know you're not alone! Another site dedicated to the "gender-free pronoun" is at Gender-Neutral Pronoun Frequently Asked Questions.
Those are both good sentences.
It might be useful to compare the forms of who to the forms of the pronouns he and they. Their forms are similar:
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Subject |
Possessive |
Object |
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Singular |
he |
his |
him |
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Plural |
they |
their |
them |
To choose correctly among the forms of who, re-phrase the sentence so you choose between he and him. If you want him, write whom; if you want he, write who.
The only problem most writers have with whose is confusing it with who's, which looks like a possessive but is really the contraction for who is. In the same way that we should not confuse his with he's (the contraction for he is or he has), we should not confuse whose with who's.
Whose can be used to refer to inanimate objects as well as to people (although there is a kind of folk belief that it should refer only to humans and other mammals): "I remember reading a book — whose title I can't recall right now — about a boy and a basenji."